Tuesday, January 14, 2020

Entry 3 : Editing ,correcting and updating

Assallamualaikum and a very good morning 
Alhamdulillah,we have completed :
1. The Community Service Projects
2. The Report Writing
3. The Oral Presentations
 Now is the time to do the editing, correcting and updating your materials for the betterment of the products.
Please reflect on how you carry out the tasks. 
**How did you divide them?
**Did your lecturer give detailed instructions on the ways to produce your materials?
**During the editing and correcting, what were the lessons learnt?
**Other parts you would like to highlight on.







47 comments:

Aiman said...

Salam everyone. I would to share my experience in improving our report. First of all, I would like to say thank you to Madam Mas for being such kind teacher. She always in her students' hearts.
During the improvement of the report, my group and I have asked some opinion from Madam Mas related on how the format, the details and so on. We also asked for any ideas in make our report more interesting. She gave us a lot of choices.
We were glad that, Madam Mas always be there for ther students. We actually can't imagine what will happen to our project if Madam Mas doesn't give a hand.

Amir Irsyad said...

First of all thank you madam for encourage us to doing all our report on google application such as google Doc and google slides. This really make our work easier because we can view and edit our report anytime and anywhere by only use our on smartphone. Compare to use Microsoft PowerPoint,using google slides and google docs, we can easily share our report to madam to check what we need to improve. All of our work will automatically saved on google drive so, we no need to worry if we don't save it before turning off our device. Conclusion, i am really thankful to Madam for teaching and encourage us to use this google application,our work are become easier right now,other than that, we can encourage our friends to use this application on their learning.

Ahmad Aslam said...

Assalamualaikum to everyone.From this project,we also know how to attract the others to share and like our video.Before we posting our video to Facebook,we always check our mistake in video to make improvements for getting the highest likes from the students.We also update with the pictures from our project to make people interest for uor video.Thank you!!!

Farhanis said...

Salam and a very good afternoon to a very one... First of all I want to thanks madam mas because of your guidance to us during this project. We always refer to madam if we have any curious or not sure about our work. So from that madam can correct if we do any error.At the end,after we finish all of our work, it time for to edit our video and improve to attract people to watch our videos and also like and give a pisiyif comment for us and also rate us with five stars, really hope well. We use many various of app to edit our work and our video such as Google drive, Google slide, power point and edited video. All of this app really help us and also make our work easier. Google drive is automatically save our work, so we don't have to worry if we forget to click button save. So from that I really recommend it to use this app yo do work in thus.... T think that all from for today.... Thank you

Farhanis said...

Salam and a very good afternoon to a very one... First of all I want to thanks madam mas because of your guidance to us during this project. We always refer to madam if we have any curious or not sure about our work. So from that madam can correct if we do any error.At the end,after we finish all of our work, it time for to edit our video and improve to attract people to watch our videos and also like and give a pisiyif comment for us and also rate us with five stars, really hope well. We use many various of app to edit our work and our video such as Google drive, Google slide, power point and edited video. All of this app really help us and also make our work easier. Google drive is automatically save our work, so we don't have to worry if we forget to click button save. So from that I really recommend it to use this app yo do work in thus.... T think that all from for today.... Thank you

Shasha said...

Assalamualaikum madam😊
I am glad that we're able to complete those tasks within time although it is not as perfect as we have hoped it would, but there's nothing perfect right? Our group had to enlarge the font size and a few grammar that I noticed after the presentation. Two of us cooperated on fixing the font size, while the other two helped correcting the grammar, and one of us were assigned to print out the slides. We shared money for the printouts and were very satisfied with the outcome. Madam Mas had helped us a lot, guiding us and making sure that our work is presentable and documented in the right way. From this, I have learned that every process needs double checking and improvements because we as humans tend to create minor errors along the way. It is in our nature. Imperfections are what make us humane.
All in all the while process of editing, correcting and updating went well for our group. Alhamdulillah! Thankyou madam Mas ♥️

Dalila syuhada said...

Asslm ,I think we're so lucky because madam mas give us a long time to finish our work,and from the photo that's the time we were corrected our slide , video and report.I wanna thanks to madam mas and my team for helping me to complete the project successful. I'm so thanks to the lucky stars for giving me them which is always helping me. we were doing the correcting in every time and everywhere that we wanted.after finish edit the project we were told to print the project to submit the assignment.

areesyaasmadi said...

assalammualaikum madam, since we were three in a group, we divide all our task into three equal parts. so that, everyone will have their own work and not just wait for the work to be done. madam told us a lot on how we are going to handle our task from the begining (briefing for the task) untill the last (presentation on our project). so, we did handle our project easily from all the help given by madam. during the editing and others, we learn that we should help each other since we were doinf our task in group. thats all. thankyou

Maisarah Shaffe said...

Assalamualaikum,i want to share how i and my team divide our task evenly.First,we did the report and slide together then after finished,we divide equally to each other but with our own agreement. Then,we met Madam Mas to make sure our works are correct or not. Next,we did correction refer to what Madam has said to us. The last stage was printed the report and slide to give to Madam Mas. Thank you to my team for being active and positive during our project begin until the end of the project. I really proud of them. What i get is we still together no matter hard the task we get,we still can do it together

Azli Saufi said...

Assalamualaikum Madam,first of all I want to thank Madam for guiding us from A to Z to make this project a success. Various preparations are underway for this project. editing,correcting and updating process almost all of us ask for the opinion of Madam and Madam to contribute her ideas to us. From there we were able to learn and improve our knowledge of further ways to manage projects.Without Madam we might not be able to run this project as well. Thank you Madam!

Ainin said...

Assalamualaikum madam. I am very proud that our group success to sent the report. Well i would like to thanks to one of my teammates, shasha, because she helps a lot in making the report perfect. Well not exactly petfect but we did our best. We try so hard to make sure madam really satisfied with our report and turn out madam love it. It make us very very happy. Yeahh we really appreciate when madam post in her facebook telling that our group make the best report among the others. I'm very sure all of us really enjoyed our time during we making the report. Thanks madam and my teammates

Anis Shafikah said...

Assalamualaikum madam. First of all I would like to express my gratitude to madam since madam already helped us a lots since the beginning stage until the report for our community service. It was a fun activity to correct and editing the slide and also the report. Thanks for madam because always give us advice and guidance for our report. Through this, we can know where is our mistake and we cam improve our report and also our english. From there, we learnt our mistake. I was the one who edited the slides for presentation as my other group mate editing the report. We finished the works together and sent it to madam. I'm really glad that my group mate also cooperated very well. For the last stage, Madam asked us to print the slide, and we printed it at cyber room. It was an easy and fun task to do. We also corrected the slide which you have urge us to correct it. Thank you Madam for your supports and advices until we done the community service on this last part.

Muhammad nazmi said...

Assalamualaikum Mdm..we devide according to slide..like a person need to doing 3 or 4 slide of the report..lesson that we had learnt that we should follow the guide from what MDM give to us before we make the report..and we should doing the report More interesting so the reader will not feel bored..we need more improve in order to make a very beautiful report writing..also thanks to MDM because you give us the guide on how to make a good report.

umizatul shafiza said...

Assalamualaikum. thanks a lot to madam mas because give us opportunities to do comunity service project. i learnt a new knowledge when do a report. i learnt how to use google docs and it was an easy way.

Nur Qamarina said...

Assalamualaikum madam, i am so glad because we have done our community service very well. We also already send the report to madam. First of all, the things that i learn form the report writing is, we need to cooperate to full fill the task. If we’re not do it by teamwork, then we cannot send it on time because its not finish yet. So our group decide to divide the task to our group member, so all of the member must do the task and then we combine the task after finish. And thank you to madam too because always guide us when we are doing our report writing.

Shah said...

Assalammualikum Madam.Thanks for giving us the opportunity to complete our Community Service. The time that you allocated to us was used to improvise our report and presentation slides. Thank you again madam.

Nurin Athirah said...

Asalamualaikum madam,I would like to share my group members journey while doing our community service report writing and our oral presentations. Before we start doing our report we did a meeting to make sure the task divide equally between us. We had successfully finished our report writing on time. By doing the report, we also learnt how to write a community service report completely while improving our writing skills. I would like to thanks to Madam Mastura for guiding us thoroughly along the journey without any hesitations.

Afiqah said...

Hello madam! I would like to share our journal about editing, correcting and updating our material of the betterment of this project. As a teamwork, we divided the task equally as everyone in the group had our own section. Alhamdulillah, the process went well. As everyone knows Madam Mas as our lecturer gave us a lot of information and guide us until this project end. She gave the detail instruction so that we never miss any information. We also enjoyed doing this kind of work because we could strengthen bond among us. The loves in friendship become stronger because we got to know each other better! I am so glad that I have a good lecturer that always support us from the start. I admit that it is not an easy work but Madam made that easier by helping us! Thank you madam for all the sacrifices and the advices. Much love!

che nur ain said...

Assalamualaikum madam, i would like to share my participation in this community service. First and foremost, i would like to say thank you to madam mas for being a good and lovely teacher because she understand her student by giving them extra time to editing their writing. Madam mas also, always give a hand for her student when they had a question about the format of report or how to write the report.
In my participation, i had asked madam a few question about the format of the report and she answered it nicely by give me some example of report. In editing writting session, i was able to improve my writing skills by asking madam and my classmates about my confusion in writting the report.

Alif roslan said...

Thank you madam because you are giving us some time to finish our report as you know that we are very busy doing exercise and revision at hostel.So with this precious given time,we can finish the report and also can make any final check before submitting the report.

Alif Najmi johari said...

Assalamualaikum madam .. thank you for give us time to finish and edit our report and presentation slide ... as you know that we are very busy at the hostel because need to doing some revision and exercise... we also need some rest at hostel ... our process of editing and updating going very well ... and we have done the task .. thanks again for give us extra time and and some explaination on how to make correction in our project ... thank you again madam

Aiman said...

Salam everyone. In order to edit, correct and update the community project involved a lot of sacrifice and hard work.We need to have a few late sleep before all the task done.
But, everything change as easy as ABC when there is Madam Mas. I just want to say thank you to Madam Mas for always be there when we need. We can't even imagine what will happen to our task without Madam Mas.
She have a gold of heart. She always help us without considering the places and time I still remember the time when she still replying my chat through the telegram as fast as lightning. She will reply any chat as soon as possible in order to help her students. Last but not least, I want to say thank you again to Madam Mas for everything that she have done in order to complete our task. That's all from me. Thank you.

Firdaus said...

Hello everyone, so during the report editting my team and i divided the slides base on the progress of the task so when we present it follows the flow of our work. As we everyone doing their best to in doing their part in editting the slides and report and during this time we learn that with team work every tast will be a walk in the park.

Izzul said...

Hello guys, from this part, I just learn how to manage the PowerPoint using a computer. So its can help me to manage myself to handle an assignment in future. Beside, I would to say thank you to my team cause they help me in this progress. For me, this lesson give us many benefit because it's may give us an experience from now to we keep use in future and be more confident to handle a PowerPoint and also present in front of audience. That's all from me thank you

yuxuan said...

Now I want to shear my experience on doing report.In the community services project my position was secretary.I never hold that position before.At first, I don't know what I need to do.Fortunately, Madam Mas was give a hand.She allow us take a look for the sample of the report which done by the our senior.From that sample, I know the format and done my report.Before printing, Madam Mas was help us to check the spelling.Luckily the report have been checked and many spelling mistake have been done.At the end, our group report was pass up before the due date.I really appreciate the help give by Madam Mas.

Danial said...

Assalamualaikum everyone,we work together to complete the slide.We all share the work to edit the slide and correct what madam ask for.
It wasn’t a simple task.Its really need a hardwork and work together to correct all the task.However,its also took a long time to settle it.So,we all felt so thankful because madam give us more time.So,we can just chill to complete it.Moreover,from this task we can make our relationship more stronger because we can help each other.We also faces many problems togethers.

Ryan Zulfikrie said...

Assalamualaikum, I would like to share our group editing,correcting and updating on the report project. First of all, we ask for Madam Mas opinions to help us on the report of the project. Madam teach us many new information about the editing and correcting the report...Madam also teach us about the format of the report. The lesson give us many benefits because its give us many experiences. Thanks to Madam for really kind hearted to help us

Fahmi Azahari said...

Assalamualaikum, i would like to share my experience when editimg the video of our group about the cleanliness of cafeteria, it sure was fun editing it because i can watch the progress of our community service, the video is simple yet good enough to show the whole progress in our community service, thats all from me thank you very much.

Fahmi Azahari said...

Assalamualaikum and a very good morning, from the process of editing our slides we hand it to andrew to edit the slides as for the other we search for information that we can use to insert in the slides such as cost of the community service and tentative of the process. After we finished the slides and report we hand it to madam mastura to make sure we are in the right track.Thats all from me thank you very much

Syarifdin Nasrudin said...

Assalammualaikum , Publicly aware that our task was checked by madam and we need to correct all the mistakes and problems that we made in our task. What I want to say is that this activities really help me improve a lot in English because it helps me notice my usual mistake in english which is in grammar , spelling and others. Other than that, this activities also taught me to work together in order to solve any problems. It also taught me that we always need to ask other person if we don’t know something , it will helps us a lot in many ways. Thank you madam.

Ainin said...

Assalamualaikum madam. In this task we work together to make a perfect outcome. we have to correct all our mistakes. and from this activity we improve our language witch is grammar,spelling and others. i would like to thanks you because you teach a lesson that when we are in a group we need to have teamwork to make it sucsses.

Firas Amzar said...

Assalamualaikum,, by this activity, i can learn more about making video and editing from my friend and my lecturer. As we know,, today, technology is familiar with us, so we must know more about technology. When editing this video,, i know how to make a perfect video and make video become more interesting to watch by other friends. I am very happy because my group was make the video completely and perfectly...

Muhd aliff said...

Assalamualaikum everyone. I would like to tell you all about how i improving our report. First of all i wanted to say thank you to madam mastura for supporting us. Madam mastura also correct the mistake that we make and make sure that we do it correctly. I think thats all from me.thank you madam mastura..

aqilah said...

Assalamualikum madam. i am very proud because able to finish my community service task even we have done a lots of mistakes.By doing presentation, we notice all the mistakes and try to edit for making a perfect report.Thank you for your advice and guidance from the begginig stage until the last part which is edit and print our report.

sayuti said...

Asalamualaikum after we finish presentation madam mas ask us to correct and edit to our slides.Madam ask us to make our slide font become more bigger and clear so everyone can see our slides more clearly.we also add new style and picture to make our slides become more interesting

Raja Amirul said...

Assalamualaikum madam so on the editing part it was a little complicated for me. I was kind of wonky with editing i actually.So for the question how do we divide our works? Well we divide our work organizedly.Next our lecturer gave us the detailed instructions on way to produce our materials. Our lecturer helped us alot which is gave us tips on what we should actually do, open the path for us to actually do this community service because dont have any idea of what we actually had to do at first, and told us what should we fix in the editing in our presentation such as the colour for the font for the presentation. Answering the third question we all think that we learnt a lot of lessons from it. Firstly, we learnt to do a thing that we've never done before which is a big progress and new experience for us. wait that doesnt answer the question directly, so the answer is actually we improve our editting skill in presentation i guess, then teach us more clear way to clarify things to people and lastly repairing our grammar. I dont have any idea what to highlight on i guess that's all, Thank you.

ILham said...

Assalamualaikum,after doing the presentation ,Madam ask us to correct our mistakes from the slides. When we are correcting the mistake, we also get to gain our knowledge about spelling,grammar and others. We also get to know about the correct format of report,so I won't have any problems with reporting in the future. I hope we can do many program like this in future because it has many benefits.

CHAN ZHI YANG said...

HEY GUYS
After oral presentation,madam had give us some suggstion to improve our powerpoint slide and also report csp.
After that,we started do correction on report and slides.First major problem is the small font size of slide.Our font size is only 12,that cant attract the attraction of audiences.Thus,I changed the size to 32 and changed colour to white colour and black background.

Anonymous said...

assalamualaikum and good afternoon madam, i feel very glad cause i can give my opinion on our csp. We have already done our project. We also present our slides by present our slide all the mistake has been corrected by you. So i want to thanks to you because helping our group to finish the task.So we has improve our report by using your guidance and advice.

fajrina manshar said...

Hello! After we did all this activities, madam gave us a chance to edit in order to avoid from mistakes. For the example we got enough time to make it more attractive. We took a pictures to make our video more like a professional video. It made us more spirits to do it. Thank you madam!❤️

CHAN ZHI YANG said...

Besides that ,our csp report also had some mistakes that should do correction.First,we add picture of plant we planting after few week to report.Second,we corrected some grammatical errror.Lastly,we add some description below each picture.These correction are have significant effect to make every reader more understand our project.

THANK YOU TO MADAM FOR GUVE US OPPORTUNITY FOR REPORT WRITING

julia said...

hello madam , it was such a lilttle bit hard for me doing the editing because im not familiar with the format and have less skill in computer editing .But i was exposed by the other lecturer about some applications that are suitable and easy to use such as google slide . I used it through my phone and transfer to the laptop using my email.It is such a convenient app for me to use ! We also applied the skill for other subjects and keep on improving ourself editing skill by doing the slides . We also sharing our knowledge to the others and gained a lot of experiences . We received some comments during our presentation day about some mistakes in the slied but we took it as a compliment and try to improve ourself .

rasydan said...

Heyyy.Thanks madam for give us a chance to repair our report.From this we able to correctly the sentence and format that you want it.We also use the app that had been suggested from you which is google slide.It was easy to use.At the same time,we able to explore more about this app and teach my group member how to use it and alhamdulillah we able to finish this job only in 30 minutess.From this activities we able to send you a report without grammatical error and format.Thank madam for be kind to us.Thankkkkkkk youuu

Akmal Ridzuan said...

Assalamualaikum
So madam decided to make one of the class to edit our videos. Its been a relief as our video commentary is not so correct and luckily we had madam to give comments about it. After some minor editing and changes, our video is looking pretty good

Zamzuri said...

Assalamualaikum,thank you to madam Mas for giving us so much guidance in solving community service reports. We got a new knowledge in doing the report about the activity . Congratulations also to my team who have done a good job to complete the report without any problems. So we're more motivated in teamwork

Raja Amirul said...

Assalamualaikum, for this part firstly we thought that we've done alot of thing right but actually we were wrong about it. But our presentation were not full with flaws, it just had a bit more to touch up. But for sure if it wasn't a guide from madam it we would never realise what we did wrong and that would be bad for us as it can affects our marks on presentation for community service. Let me tell what actually were out mistake. Our first mistake was the word in the presentation. With the black background and almost same colour is with the background plus the small words size it sure affects alot when we wanna read the presentation because it was really hard to be read to be honest, we fixed it, thanks to madam. Then we got some false on the image placing. We got lots of free space in the slide for image and explanation about our activity but it seems not logical to place the image small and only two images for one activity we done. We should had do more images in one slide to increase the interest of people with our presentation and to save our marks. Eventhough madam tell us to fix that but we didn't do it. Sorry madam we were to lazy to do it. I guess thats alp flaws in our presentation. What we realise from this is we couldn't have done this presentation nicely without the help and guide from madam, thank you.

Firas Amzar said...

Assalamulaikum everyone,, i would like to add on with this task,, first of all,, we were very happy because we successfully completed the video,, but after we recheck the video,, were noticed that some part of the video having a little bit mistake,, so, we try to edit and make some improvements to the video and finally the video become perfect,, we were so glad because we have a chance to edit the video.. This because our madam was tell us which part that can be more interest to watch and and which part that having some mistake,, tq to madam mas because always support us to complete the video perfectly... Tq

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